Sonic X-Treme Adventure: I

[longliveshadow]

Hey guys. I'm back, and continuing to post fanfiction. First up is the ff that I worked on a year ago, but was completed last summer. It's Sonic X-Treme Adventure. Sonic X-Treme Adventure 2 will come by at the same time. Plus, alongh with these remakes of ffs, i will be making a brand new ff very soon (currently in works right now) anyway, heres Sonic X-Treme Adventure.



Sonic X-Treme Adventure:

Chapter 1

Dr. Eggman was deep in his lab working on a project that he calls "Project Sonic Killer". He had been working for months on working on it to be perfect. He would first start with drawings of the project. Then he would make small parts into it. Then, after many months he got to the substantial Work on the project. Then he started to build more parts, then take some out. He worked every hard for 8 months. By the time the 8 months were over, the project was almost complete.
Dr. Eggman: "Finally! All I need to do is add Sonic's life data into you counterpot. Then, Project Sonic Killer will be complete! It will surly kill Sonic this time. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

To Be Continued...

[longliveshadow]

acually, i wil post Sonic X-Treme Adventure when this one is done.

[longliveshadow]

looks like no one gives a care about it huh?

Chapter 2

Sonic & Tails were taking a vacation in a resort in Station Square. Sonic was taking a nap while Tails was out swimming. Tails came back to get a coke. While getting a Coke, he spoke to Sonic.
Tails: "You know Sonic; you should learn how to swim these days."
Sonic: "I told you many times. Hedgehogs don't swim. We weren’t brought to this world to swim."
Tails: "Sigh...alright. Whatever."
Tails then headed back to the beach. Sonic then was about to doze, but then was woke up by Tails.
Tails: "Sonic! Sonic! Wake up!"
Sonic: "What is it Tails?"
Tails: "Follow me!"
Sonic followed Tails to the beach.
Sonic: "Well, what is it?"
Tails: "The waters too cold!"
Sonic fainted. (Anime Style) then he got up.
Sonic: "That’s it?! Don't make jokes like that again!"
Sonic stormed back to the chairs and lied down and went back to sleep. Then he was woken up again by Tails.
Tails: "Sonic! Wake up!"
Sonic: "You are fibbing again?"
Tails: "No!"
Sonic got up and followed Tails again.
Tails look over there!"
There was garbage in the ocean along with a factory pouring smoke out of its smokestacks on an island.
Sonic: "What the hake is that?"
Tails: "I don’t know, but its polluting garbage in the ocean!"
Sonic: "We have to figure this out. Come on Tails, lets go to the your Workshop and take the Cyclone!"
Tails: "Right!"
Sonic and Tails left to the Mystic Ruins.

To Be Continued...

[longliveshadow]

i gueese no one wants to see this crap no more. very well. I'll just make my new ones now and never remake my old ones again. unless they want me to.

[Whitewolf37]

:shock: stop right there an' type the rest! I want to read it!

[Prolink]

Post some more, this really has me interested

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 3

Sonic and Tails went inside the workshop and took the Cyclone to the factory.
Sonic: "I’m confused. That factory wasn't there last week. How fast can they build in one week?"
Tails: "I don't know. Maybe they used Choppers to carry it over the ocean."
Sonic: "yeah probably."
They landed the Cyclone on in front of the factory. Then they looked inside through a window. Inside, there were machines that were making robots.
Sonic: "A Robot Factory? That’s probably Eggman's plan."
Tails: "Why would he want to pollute the waters and build a lot of robots?"
Dr. Eggman: "Because its part of my plan foxboy."
Sonic and Tails turned around and saw Dr. Eggman. Then Rouge came behind him.
Tails: "Rouge? Why's she with you?"
Dr. Eggman: "Shut that foxboy's big mouth now Rouge!"
Rouge flew to the air and used Drill Drive on Tails. Tails' head was stuck in the ground.
Sonic: "I won't let you harm my buddy like that Bubble Butt!"
Rouge then kicked Sonic to the ground.
Sonic: "OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!"
Dr. Eggman: "Rouge is under my control Sonic. I have a top secret plan for you in the future. Later!"
Dr. Eggman and Rouge left.
Sonic: "so.....that’s what he’s planning. What did he mean by Top secret plan? Tails! Are you alright?"
Tails got his head out of the ground.
Tails: "Not a lot."
Sonic: "Come on Tails. We need to do some research."
Sonic and Tails left in their Cyclone to the Workshop.

To Be Continued...


Sorry about the delay of seeing those posts. anyway, i'll continue, just as long as people check it out.

[Killarshark12]

Nice, but needs a bit of detail and some more description like 'Tails head was immediately slammed into the soft earth' or 'Rouge delivered a hard right leg kick into Sonic's stomach'.

[longliveshadow]

well, i haven't reedit it in a while, so i still noticed some flaws. In Sonic X-Treme Adventure 2, i gave the ff more detail and description then this. im just keeping this like it was oringianlly created.

[Killarshark12]

k.

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 4

Knuckles was on Angel Island waiting for Rouge to come back from visiting a friend down there. Then Dr. Eggman was stealing his Master Emerald again. Knuckles got up and growled.
Knuckles: "nothing can get away from me Fats!"
Knuckles jumped up and punched the Master Emerald out of the Claw, but shattered it again.
Knuckles: "Dang! I gotta stop doing that."
Dr. Eggman: "HA! Now you have to look for the pieces again."
Knuckles: "I don't care. Finding the pieces is a breeze. There can't be any problems in my way."
Dr. Eggman: "Actually, there is."
Knuckles: "Wha...?"
Dr. Eggman: "It’s about Rouge."
Knuckles: "What about Rouge?"
Dr. Eggman: "She’s in love with someone else."
Knuckles: "Who?"
Dr. Eggman: "Sonic."
Knuckles: "Sonic?"
Dr. Eggman: "Yes. The reason why she left you today is cuz she’s leaving you to go with Sonic."
Knuckles: "Wait a minute. Are you trying to trick me again?"
Dr. Eggman: "Knuckles. I wouldn't joke anything like that this time."
Dr. Eggman left.
Knuckles: "I wonder what Eggman said was true? I better find the pieces of the emerald first, and then I’ll get to the bottom of this." Knuckles left to look for the Master Emerald.

To Be Continued...

[Killarshark12]

Tiny more detail? Did you copy and paste or just type? If copied and pasted, I understand. If typed, stuff like "Rouge has another lover other than YOU." or "Knuckles was just sitting on the floating Angel Island waiting for Rouge to come back from a visit to a friend she had made."

[longliveshadow]

i copied and pasted it.

[AmyRoseHedgehog]

Very good Shads ^^

[rmbawcum]

You need to know that Rouge is not in love with Sonic.

[Killarshark12]

What the hell is wrong with you rmbawcum? Didn't ou read the last chapter? you must be retarded or something. YOu wouldn't waste words like that if you read all the posts in this topic. You remind me of this Learning Disability guy in my class.

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 5

Sonic and Tails were at the workshop looking for Dr. Eggman's hideout. Then something came on a raider. Tails went over to check it.
Tails: "There’s bandick at Station Square City Hall."
Sonic: "I’m on my way!"
Tails: "It looks like its being a weapon and...Hey! What are you doing?"
Sonic transformed the Cyclone into a car and raced it out through Tails Garage door and crashed through it.
Sonic: "Sorry Tails!"
Tails: "What an idiot."
Sonic drove the Cyclone all the way to City Hall. The police were there.
Policeman: "Sonic. We can't handle this creature. You stop him."
Sonic: "No prob."
Sonic went past the Police and the creature was Silver Sonic.
Sonic: "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! That’s it? It’s worthless. It should be in the junk yard by now."
Silver Sonic spined really fast and dashed to Sonic, but Sonic dodged it.
Sonic: "I’m tired of this. Let’s get this over with."
Sonic used the homing Attack on Silver Sonic and Silver Sonic was destroyed.
Sonic: "I’m tired of this robot in my way."
Then Dr. Eggman appeared.
Sonic: "You know that Silver Sonic isn't good against me anymore right?"
Dr. Eggman: "Of course I know that. I was trying to warm you up for the future."
Dr. Eggman left.
Sonic: "Warm me up? What’s going on?"
Sonic didn't know what was going, but he left back to the workshop.

To Be Continued...

[Killarshark12]

Since it don't take that long, why don't you copy and paste all the chps?

[longliveshadow]

because it would ruin the entire thing. i want to post a chapter one by one. (There's 25 Chapters) plus, i also want to be sure i have some watchers other then you.

[Killarshark12]

gottcha..

[Whitewolf37]

I'm with killer shark, a lil' more detial couldn't hurt, but I think it's good anyhow. :D

[longliveshadow]

wait till you see X-treme Adventure 2. It's got more detail and the chapters are longer, with a few great points in it. This is just in ff that was made nearly a year ago.

[longliveshadow]

heres a bit of a laughing streck.

Chapter 6

Knuckles looks for the pieces until he sees Nack taking some pieces.
Knuckles: "Those are my pieces Nack! Give them back."
Nack: "Never! With these pieces I will make Millions!"
Knuckles: "Cut!"
Director: "Now what is it?"
Knuckles: "I’m sick of this freak Guest Star always doing the same plot over and over!"
Nack: "Who you calling a freak you knuckled freak? I’m only doing this once. This is the only time I appear in LLS's ff."
Knuckles: "Well I’m sick of you being an annoying freak that loves money. Go to Hell!"
Director: "HEY!!! One more curse and you'll be kicked out Knuckles. Get back to work!"
Knuckles: "Fine."
Director: "and...Go!"
Knuckles punched Nack in the face.
Nack: "NOWWWWCH!!!"
Knuckles takes the pieces of the emerald.
Knuckles: "That’s the last time you appear in LLS's ff's."
Knuckles leaves with the Master Emerald pieces.

To Be Continued...

[longliveshadow]

yeah, i know, it's kinda stupid

[Killarshark12]

It's sorta funny. Not stupid though. Oh yeah, Whitewolf, LLS is copyin and pastin, so he can't detail it more.

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 7

Sonic and Tails founded something on their radar.
Tails: "I think we found Eggman's hideout. It’s at his old base in the jungle."
Sonic: "Then let’s go!"
Sonic and Tails went in the Jungle to Dr. Eggman's old base. Then on their way, they met Knuckles.
Sonic: "What’s up Knux? Haven’t seen you since the last ff."
Knuckles then ran to Sonic and gave him a punch in the face.
Sonic: "OUUUUUCHH! What was that for?"
Knuckles: "Don't play games with me hedgehog!"
Knuckles then ran and punched Sonic high in the air. Then Sonic was crashed into the ground. The Sonic popped his head out.
Sonic: "That’s it! You asked for it!"
Sonic then used Homing attack on Knuckles, but Knuckles blocked it and gave him another punch in the face.
Tails: "Man! Knuckles sure is mad."
Knuckles then picked up Sonic and smashed him hard in the ground, leaving Sonic with a bloody nose, broken head, and cuts all over his body.
Sonic: "Knuckles............why? ........why..........did .........you attack..........me?"
Knuckles: "Cuz you stole my girl you weasel! Rouge was mine! You can't just take her!"
Sonic: "I........didn't........take her."
Knuckles: "Huh?"
Sonic: "Well, Rouge attacked us first and is on Eggman's side so she’s under his control. HEY!!!"
Sonic got up angry.
Sonic: "Let me guess. Fatman told you this?"
Knuckles: "Yeah."
Sonic: "YOU GUILIBLE IDOIT!!! EGGMAN DUPED YOU AGIAN. WHY ARE YOU SO STUIPID? WHY I WOULD..."
Tails: "Ok Sonic. Calm down. Knuckles understands now."
Sonic: "Oh, sorry."
Knuckles: "Well if Bubble Butt took her, then I'll get him for good this time. Come on, let’s go!"
Sonic, Tails and Knuckles went to Dr. Eggman's secret old base.

To Be Continued...

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 8

Sonic, Knuckles and Tails went into Dr. Eggman's base. Then robots surrounded them. then Dr. Eggman appeared.
Dr. Eggman: "So, you guys thought you guys could have just browse in my base huh?"
Sonic: "Can't get away with this Eggman. You never did. So give us back Rouge!"
Knuckles: "Yeah or you'll get a big balloon on you @SS!"
Dr. Eggman: "NEVER!"
Sonic: "Then prepare to die!"
Then over 30 robots surrounded them.
Dr. Eggman: "HA! All of my robots surrounded you, I have Rouge, and now I also have these guys."
Mighty, Espio and Charmy appear behind Dr. Eggman with mad faces on.
Tails: "Dang! Now Fat @ss has Knuckles' buds."
Knuckles: "I’m will never trusting you again Bubble Butt. You can't just take my friends like that!"
Dr. Eggman: "Yeah I can. If you make another move Knuckles, your Girlfriend dies with my garlic gun."
Knuckles: "NOOOOOOO!!! Don't! Ok, you win."
Dr. Eggman: "What are you going to do now Sonic? I have your friends, and there’s no way out right now. Choose."
Sonic: "Alright Eggman. You win. I give up."
Dr. Eggman: "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! I finally did it! I captured Sonic! Robots, take them to the Egg Prison!"
The Robots commanded them to jail.
Tails: "Sonic. What are you doing?"
Sonic: "Don't worry Tails. I got a plan."

To Be Continued...

[DarkShadow]

All I have to say is, long live shadow.. :lol: :o :? :shock:

[Eyedye]

Inspiring, keep it up. But I will be very amused once I see Robotnik have his way. :twisted:

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 9

Sonic, Tails and Knuckles went in their prison.
Tails: "How are we going to get out Sonic?"
Sonic: "Ok, here’s the plan. Tails, you go and distract the robots while Knuckles and I will cut a hole in the wall to outside. We’ll let you know when were done. Got that?"
Knuckles & Tails: "Yeah!"
Sonic: "Ok, let’s move!"
Tails went to the cell cages.
Tails: "Hey guys!"
Robots came to Tails.
Tails: "Can you guys tell me what kind of parts you were built out of?"
Knuckles: "Ok, let’s go!"
Sonic sawed through the wall while Knuckles punches it hard. Then they made a huge hole in the wall.
Sonic: "Come on Tails!"
Tails left them. Then the robots saw they've been duped. So they just went outside. When Sonic, Tails and Knuckles were out there, they saw a rocket ship blast off to space.
Sonic: "Whoa! That’s a whole a lot of fart from the old man!"
Tails: "Sonic! That wasn't in the script!"
Then the Robots appeared. Knuckles took them out with a punch.
Knuckles: "It’s all in the fist."
Sonic: "Come on! Were going to Outer space! To Stop Egg Butt!"
Tails and Knuckles: "Yeah!"
They both went to the desert base of Dr. Eggman and took a shuttle to space.

To Be Continued...

[uhhsam]

hey nub, check the scripts forum there's a message for you sir

[longliveshadow]

thanks for the message.

[Killarshark12]

Need-to-find-out..

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 10

Sonic, Tails and Knuckles arrived at the moon. They went out and saw Dr. Eggman in front of them.
Sonic: "there you are!"
Knuckles: "Give me back Rouge you fat butt!"
Dr. Eggman: "Never! Sonic has to defeat Metal Sonic!"
Metal Sonic comes behind Dr. Eggman.
Sonic: "uh oh."
Metal Sonic fly’s up in the air and zooms to Sonic. But Sonic dodges it.
Sonic: "HAHA!"
Metal Sonic then zoomed to Sonic kicked him high up in the air. Sonic was close to be sucked out in space.
Sonic: "Gotta get back!"
Sonic waved his arms very fast and made it back on to the ground. Metal Sonic then picked up Sonic and threw him to the ground hard. Sonic laid there for a while.
Sonic: "..........................................."
Sonic then got up and again and ran away. Metal Sonic chased him.
Sonic: "You’re never as fast as me Metal; you’re just made out of bolts."
Metal Sonic got mad and his eyes grew very red. He blasted to Sonic and crashed into him.
Sonic: "OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!"
Metal sonic stood next to Sonic seeing if he was dead. Sonic got up and quickly sawed him in pieces.
Sonic: "HA! You’re finished!"
Dr. Eggman ran to Metal Sonic's pieces.
Sonic: "I beat Metal Sonic once again Egg Butt. Give up!"
Dr. Eggman: "You've seen nothing Hedgehog. I have a top secret weapon that I’ve been working on for months. Bow down to Infinite Sonic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
A dark creature appeared behind Dr. Eggman. When he got closer, Sonic could see it. It was Golden Sonic robot with sharper quills then Metal Sonic's.
Sonic: "what is that?"
Dr, Eggman: "It’s my new creation! Meet Infinite Sonic! He will destroy you good!"
Sonic: "yeah right."
Sonic ran to Infinite Sonic to push him to the ground but Infinite Sonic put his fist out and punched sonic so hard Sonic flew a mile away from Infinite Sonic. Infinite Sonic then flew and crashed into Sonic and punched, and kicked him. Then, Infinite Sonic used Psychic Powers to lift Sonic up and threw smashed him multiple times on the ground. Infinite Sonic stopped and checked Sonic. Sonic was bleeding in a few places, a leg broken and a black eye.
Dr. Eggman: "well, what do you think of Infinite Sonic now?"
Sonic: "You forgot that...*falls to the ground and gets back up* I have Chaos Emeralds. So, I’m goanna leave for a while to get Chaos Emeralds. I'll beat you next time!"
Sonic runs back to the shuttle with Tails and Knuckles.
Dr. Eggman: "I doubt you'll beat Infinite Sonic. He’s already 3X better then Metal Sonic. Go ahead. WASTE YOUR TIME! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!"

To Be Continued...

[Killarshark12]

Is this copy and paste? Or is it hand typed? If so, little more detail..

[longliveshadow]

Is this copy and paste? Or is it hand typed? If so, little more detail..how many times do I have to say this? It's copied and paste. tell you what, when i make the sequal, i'll try to put more detail.

[Killarshark12]

Yeah, I forgot. But ok, cool..

[longliveshadow]

today, as a bonus, i'll post 2 chapters. enjoy!

Chapter 11

When Sonic, tails and Knuckles went back to earth, they landed the shuttle in front of the workshop.
Tails: "We gotta find the Chaos and Super Emeralds Sonic."
Sonic: "We'll split up and find them. Knuckles you look for the Super Emeralds on Angel Island and else where you know and I and Tails will look down here."
Knuckles: "Sounds good to me."
All 3 left for the search.

To Be Continued...

Chapter 12

Sonic and Tails looked in a tall deep jungle. It was 90 degrees and humid.
Tails: "where do you think a Chaos Emerald might be Sonic?"
Sonic: "I don't know. I’m goanna have to look in trees, ground and everywhere I guess."
Tails: "if we had Rouge's emerald tracker, we'd find one in a jiff."
Sonic: "yeah."
Sonic and Tails searched for hours in jungle. Looking through trees, sawing through vines, and digging in the ground and they couldn't find a lot of Chaos Emeralds. They were tired after all that searching at the end of the day.
Sonic: "I don't think there’s a single element of a Chaos Emerald anywhere!"
Tails: "We can't give up Sonic, or Infinite Sonic will destroy the world. Did you see how powerful he is? He punches and kicks like Knuckles and is extremely faster then you, and the worst, he has Psychic powers! You can't beat him as Sonic. You might if you become Hyper Sonic."
Sonic: "you’re right Tails. Let’s keep looking."
Then they looked everywhere for it but couldn't find any emeralds anywhere. Soon, they saw Nack walking by with a Chaos Emerald. Sonic and Tails went to Nack.
Sonic: "Nack, I’m sorry, but we need that emerald you have."
Nack: "Why?"
Tails: "Because we need it to save the world. Were in Danger right now. Eggman will use this robot to destroy the world and Sonic needs to be Hyper Sonic to beat him. Please?"
Nack looked at the jewel.
Nack: "Well, ok."
Sonic: "Thanks Nack!!! You’re an ok guy sometimes."
Nack gave Sonic the emerald.
Tails: "see ya."
Sonic and Tails left quickly.
Nack: "Good luck!"
Sonic and Tails thought that the jungle wouldn't have anymore emeralds, so they left the jungle and went to the desert. They found a little building ahead of them.
Sonic: "Maybe it’s in here!"
They went up to the door, but it had a Sign on it.
Tails: "It says, "Chamber of torture: go through the chamber and get treasure."
Sonic: "Well, it’s worth a try."
They went in the chamber. It had statures and pictures on walls. They run ahead, and avoid traps and creatures trying to get them. Soon, they arrived in a room, filled with lava, swinging ropes, and flames everywhere.
Sonic: "this will be challenging. But I always wanted hard adventure! Let’s go!"
Sonic jumped and swung on a rope across the lava and landed on the other side, where there walls going fast to crash them, but the exit was close and writing was on it.
Sonic: "It says, "Go get a key in the middle of the lava pit.""
Sonic looked and back and he saw a key on a platform in the middle of the lake of magma.
Sonic: "Dang!!! I’ll be right back Tails. You put the key in the door when I get back."
Tails: "Ok."
Sonic quickly jumped to the platform and got the key. The walls were close to crushing Tails. Sonic quickly jump wall dashed to the top and gave Tails the key and Tails opened the door and got in and got out of the walls and the walls crushed against each other.
Tails: "we did it!!! Great job Sonic!"
Tails gives Sonic a high five.
Sonic: "Thanks. Let’s go get the treasure!"
They both went to the room in front of them, went in there was a bag. They opened the bag and there was 2 Chaos Emeralds in it.
Tails: "Alright!!! We got 3 Chaos Emeralds now!"
Sonic: "good. Let’s go!"
They left the chamber and left the hot desert. It took them a while to get out but they were tried from the Adventure so far and it’s was hot and hard for Sonic to run in the sand. So they collapsed on the sand and really tried and hungry. They fell asleep and dreamed. Sonic dreamed on when he would rescue Tails. And Tails dreamed on when they first met. He really liked Sonic as a brother. They woke up still tried, hungry and weak and went on.
Tails: "I wish we had water. I’m tried."
Sonic: "Me too Tails. But there’s no city around here. We’ll have to keep moving on."
They ran as fast as they can and finally got out of the desert. Then they saw a rest stop ahead of them.
Sonic: "Thank the lord!!!"
Sonic and Tails went in the rest shop ad went to the snack counter. A green hedgehog was in charge.
Green hedgehog: "My! You boys are tried and weak.
Sonic: "we've been hunting for Chaos...Emeralds in the desert and were I hungry."
Green Hedgehog: "Oh my! Here, have some water. It’s free."
She gave them water bottles while Sonic and Tails dranked them in 20 seconds.
Green Hedgehog: "My names, Acey. Nice to meet you."
Sonic: "I’m Sonic. Sonic the hedgehog."
Acey: "Oh my God! You’re Sonic? Awesome!!! I’m your fan."
Sonic: "cool."
Tails tapped Sonic's shoulder.
Tails: "A-HEM!!!"
Sonic: "Sorry. And this is my sidekick, Tails."
Acey: "I've herd of you Tails. You’re a real cutie. So where are you guys heading?"
Sonic: "Were off to get Chaos Emeralds. We found 3, and we need them all."
Acey: "I know where one of them is."
Sonic: "you do?"
Acey: "Yeah. It’s not too far from here. Go to the waterfalls and there 2 Chaos emeralds behind there."
Sonic: "thanks. Well see ya!"
Tails: "Yeah, bye!"
Acey: "See ya boys."
On there way out, Tails blushed from when Acey said he was cute.
Sonic: "Let’s go Tails."
Tails snaps out of it now.
Tails: "Ok Sonic!"
They both run toward the water falls. They saw a waterfall as tall as a 5 story building. They went behind it and found the Emeralds.
Tails: "This is great!!! Now we have 5 Chaos Emeralds!"
Sonic: "All thanks to Acey."
Tails: "yep."
Sonic: "Now let’s see where the last 2 Chaos Emeralds might be."
Tails: "How about the city?"
Sonic: "Good idea!"
They both left back to Station Square. It took them the entire day to get there; it was dark time by the time they got there. They went in the Casino's hotel to stay for the night. The next morning they checked out and looked in the city.
Tails: "Sonic, I’ll look in the skyline. Ok?"
Sonic: "Fine with me."
Tails flew up high in the sky and looked. Sonic ran through an area like City Escape stage. He couldn't find any. Tails found 2 Chaos Emeralds on that building that looks like the Transamerica Pyramid in San Francisco. Tails flew around to find Sonic. He found him on a bench in front of a restaurant.
Sonic: "hey Tails! I didn't find any. Sorry."
Tails: "That’s ok Sonic. Because I found them!"
Tails showed Sonic the 2 Chaos Emeralds.
Sonic: "awesome Tails! You are the best!!!"
They both hug each other.
Sonic: "I'd consider you my partner and the best sidekick ever!"
Tails: "Thanks Sonic! You a great hero! Well. Now we got the Emeralds, let’s go back to the workshop and meet Knuckles."
Sonic: "ok."
Tails: "Come on. I’ll fly us there."
Sonic: "cool."
Tails flew and held Sonic over Station Square and took him back to the workshop.

To Be Continued...

[Killarshark12]

I like it, I like it..

[deathwarrior]

very good story :mrgreen:

[longliveshadow]

very good story :mrgreen:thank you.

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 13

Before Sonic and Tails went back to the workshop, Knuckles has been searching on Angel Island for the Super Emeralds. He looked in an old temple not too far away from the shrine.
Knuckles: "I wonder if it’s in here."
Knuckles entered in the temple. It was dark inside. He saw a ghost. It was King Boom Boo.
Knuckles: "Oh great."
King Boom Boo: "BRAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Knuckles: "Shut up!"
Knuckles shined a flashlight on King Boom Boo, but it didn't fad.
Knuckles: "I’m goanna have to show some sunshine."
Knuckles opened the door to outside and the sunlight crashed in the temple and King Boom Boo was faded.
Knuckles: "That guy is weird."
Knuckles on in the temple. Then he saw a big door. He tried to open it, but it was locked.
Knuckles: "this is out of stone. I can break it in one punch."
Knuckles gave the door a big right cross and hole was made on the door. Knuckles went through and saw a Super Emerald in a closet.
Knuckles: "Why would someone put a jewel in a closet? Oh well."
Knuckles took the Super Emerald and went out of the temple. He went to the Red Mountain. He climbed on the tallest mountain and looked around. He then saw a shiny thing in the ground. Knuckles tried to get it out, but the ground was too hard.
Knuckles: "sigh...I need my shovel Claws to get it. I'll go back to the shrine of the Master Emerald and get them there."
Knuckles left Red Mountain and glided to the Shrine of the Master Emerald. He picked up his Shovel Claws and went back. He dug in the area and he just found a ring.
Knuckles: "well, at least I got my Shovel Claws now."
Knuckles glides around Red Mountain to see if there was a Super Emerald in sight. He soon found a small Mountain with a door. He went in and he was in hell!!! (Well, sorta) He looked around the cave and he found a Super Emerald on the ceiling acting like a stalactite. He tried to get it off but it was stuck.
Knuckles: "Great. Now what am I goanna do?"
Knuckles tried to pull as hard as he can for a while. Until, he finally pulled it out.
Knuckles: "Alright!!! 2 down, 4 to go."
LLS: No! It’s "Alright!!! 2 down, 5 to go."
Knuckles: "Oh, sorry."
Knuckles left the hell looking cave and left the Red Mountain.
Knuckles: "I have to look everywhere on this island. So I have to keep going."
Knuckles glides to the Ice Mountain. He landed because a Snowstorm started. He griped his arms around him and walked up the mountain looking around.
Knuckles: "Man I miss Rouge. I wish she can see me coming to her in this Snowstorm. Oh Well. I have to do this mission anyway, to get my Master Emerald back."
Knuckles continued on ward. When Knuckles finally got out of the storm, he was at the top of Ice Mountain.
Knuckles: "Now where can a Super Emerald be?"
Knuckles still looked around on the mountain. Then he saw something in the ground, and it looked alive.
Knuckles: "Hey! Are you ok?"
Knuckles dug him out. He dug out Mighty.
Knuckles: "Mighty! How'd he get out? Are you ok? Can you hear me?"
Mighty slowly opened hiss eyes.
Mighty: "Knu...knuckles?"
Knuckles: "Don't worry, you'll be ok."
Knuckles glides Mighty back to the Shrine of the Master Emerald. He put him on a floor while Mighty slowly went in his shell to keep warm.
Knuckles: "How'd you get off of the moon?"
Mighty: "Somehow something I think ruined Eggman's machine that hypnotized us. Then Eggman quickly rehypnotised most of us, but I managed to escape by going in on of his rockets. But on my way back to earth, I crashed on your island."
Knuckles: "You are really lucky Mighty. Look, when you get better, will you please help me find the Super Emeralds?"
Mighty: "For what?"
Knuckles: "Eggbutt made creation Sonic can't beat by himself, so if Sonic can be Hyper Sonic, he can destroy him. Sonic and Tails are out now to get the Chaos Emeralds while I look for the Super Emeralds. wanna help me?"
Mighty: "Sure. That’s what friends are for."
Knuckles: "Thanks."
Knuckles waited till Mighty got better in a few hours. After that they looked in the Sandtropollis area (The zone from Sonic & Knuckles) they looked for any Super Emeralds around. There was a Sandstorm occurring. It was rough. Mighty could withstand it though, but Knuckles had a hard time.
Mighty: "Hey Knuckles! I see Super Emerald up ahead!"
Knuckles: "Really? where?"
Mighty: "It’s behind that big tomb. Let’s go."
They went behind the tomb and found a Super Emerald buried in the sand.
Knuckles: "Great! were 3 down 4 to go. Will have all of them in no time."
Then they saw a pyramid. They went in it. It was Dark inside. They found a Treasure chest ahead of them. they opened it and saw 2 Jewels, but they weren't Super Emeralds. They were both Aqua colored. There was a card in it. Knuckles read it.

"I’m sorry for Stealing these gems. I now know that this is where they belong. It disturbs the legend easy, so I understand. I hope the legended forgives me.

Rouge."

There were hearts all over the card.
Knuckles: "Strange that she once stole these."
Mighty: "Let’s move on."
They went out of the Pyramid the Moon go by the Sun.
Knuckles: WOW!!! that’s a Solar Eclipse!"
When the Solar eclipse faded, there was 2 Super Emeralds in front of them.
Mighty: "Maybe the Sun gives us these Super Emeralds as gifts because we are trying to save the planet."
Knuckles: "Thanks Lord! Now we need 2 more Emerald's left."
Knuckles Glides Mighty Back to the Shrine and separated to look for the other pieces. Knuckles looked in the Skies while Mighty looked in the Volcano. Knuckles glides for a while Until he saw one Super Emerald on a big cloud. Mighty, on the other Hand, found one in the magma. (I know, Mighty sure can get used to heat) They both got back at the same time.
Knuckles: "Yes! we rule!"
Knuckles reaches his hand up while Mighty claps it.
Mighty: "YEAH!!! Let’s go back!"
The both jumped off of Angel Island and landed on the Workshop.

To Be Continued...

[deathwarrior]

nice :mrgreen:

[Killarshark12]

Still very cool.

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 14

Tails landed Sonic on top of the workshop and waited for Knuckles. They waited for 10 minutes then they saw Knuckles and Mighty fall from the sky and landed on the roof. The walked to Sonic and Tails on the roof.
Sonic: "Mighty?! you escaped?"
Mighty: "Yeah and I made it back to earth by my own and was desperate until Knuckles found me."
Knuckles: "He’s helping us stop Eggbutt. He also helped me get the Super Emeralds. Here’s your Super Emeralds Sonic!"
Knuckles throw the Super Emeralds high in the air. Tails then threw the Chaos Emeralds high in the air. Sonic then closed his eyes and closed his hands and shook them. Then the Emerald spun around really fast. Then light came out of the Emeralds and Sonic. Then Sonic glowed in golden & Wight light. Then it faded and Sonic was covered with golden and flashy Whitish all over his body. And his eyes turned from Grass Green to Crimson Red. Sonic turned into Hyper Sonic!
Hyper Sonic: "It’s been a while since I’ve been Hyper. Let’s go everyone!"
Hyper Sonic grabbed Mighty, Tails and Knuckles and flew through the atmosphere. Hyper Sonic and his friend were surrounded in a shield where they can breathe air. In 10 minutes later, they landed on the moon.

To Be Continued...

[deathwarrior]

i like it good story :mrgreen:

[Killarshark12]

good

[longliveshadow]

I think this is one of the best chapters

Chapter 15

Hyper Sonic looked around to see if Dr. Eggman was still there. He was nowhere in sight. Then he saw him in a Red shirt and Black Rubber pants, but his red shirt had black strips on it now and made him look more evil.
Dr. Eggman: "Oh ho! I see you hunted for the Chaos and Super Emeralds Sonic. HA! What a waste of time."
Mighty: "Shut up you blimp."
Dr. Eggman called out Infinite Sonic and it punched Mighty about a 1/2 mile away from the others.
Dr. Eggman: "You may have escaped from me Mighty, but I can still boss you around."
Hyper Sonic: "That’s wrong to boss people around Eggman. and you can't do that."
Tails: "Like you think you never boss us around."
Sonic: *sweatdrop* "Oh right."
Dr. Eggman: "Like I said, You'll never defeat Infinite Sonic. Even if you are in Hyper form. Ok Infinite, Destroy Sonic for good!"
Infinite's eyes glowed Green and his body glowed Blue. They he quickly blasted to Hyper Sonic. Hyper Sonic was knocked out. Hyper Sonic quickly got up though and charged high up in the air of the moon. Infinite Sonic followed him. He used his agility to outsmart Hyper Sonic; But Hyper Sonic could still see him. Hyper Sonic dodged every little attack Infinite Sonic tried. Then Infinite Sonic then flew upwards and in 0.2 seconds, He blasted down and crashed into Hyper Sonic, and Hyper Sonic crashed to the ground. He quickly got and tried a new way for battle. He glides forward away from Dr. Eggman's Moon base then when Infinite Sonic followed, He quickly rammed into Infinite Sonic but Infinite Sonic grabbed him and threw him a the way to a crater.
Knuckles: "Man, Infinite Sonic is tougher then I thought."
Dr. Eggman: "You bet he is."
Tails: "I don't think Sonic can handle him!"
Hyper Sonic weakly got up and tried again. This time he blasted at Hyper Sonic and turned into a bolt of lighting to shock Infinite Sonic. He bumped into Infinite Sonic and Hyper Sonic's static shocked Infinite Sonic. But Infinite somehow withstand it.
Hyper Sonic: "What the...!!! No one can't resist my shock attacks!"
Infinite Sonic kicked Hyper Sonic high in the space. Then Hyper Sonic flew away from Moon and headed towards Mars. Infinite Sonic followed.
Tails: "Oh man! I wonder what will happen if we can't see them?"
Dr. Eggman: "Trust me. Infinite Sonic will win!"
Mighty: "I hope not."
Hyper Sonic landed on Mars in 5 minutes, but he didn't see Infinite Sonic behind him.
Hyper Sonic: "Where'd he go?"
He looked around Mars. There was nothing in sight. But then Infinite was behind and rock and blasted him with a laser. It was painful.
Hyper Sonic: "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! That hurts!"
Then Hyper Sonic growled and rushed to Infinite and gave him a big punch. Infinite Sonic fell to the ground. But Infinite Sonic got up again and rushed up in the pink atmosphere of Mars. Hyper Sonic didn't follow this time. He then moved his quills around and made them sharper and harder. Now they were sharp as a knife Blade and harder then steel! Then he spined real fast like a chainsaw and rolled fast in the atmosphere and knocked at Infinite Sonic and tried to cut him off. But there wasn't even a scratch on Infinite Sonic!
Hyper Sonic: "Man! Fats really did make him strong!"
Dr. Eggman from really far away: "I herd that you ****!"
Hyper Sonic laughed at him and then got back to battle. Infinite Sonic was above him and was shooting Laser balls at Hyper Sonic. Hyper Sonic dodged all of them. Infinite Sonic still tried shooting. Then suddenly, one of them hit Hyper Sonic. He felt sift from the laser. Hyper Sonic quickly recovered and went on with the chase. Then Infinite Sonic caught up to him and punched him high in the air and Hyper Sonic was sent out of the pink Atmosphere and Mars. Hyper Sonic felt weak now. But Hyper Sonic flew away again. This time he went to the Asteroid belt. Infinite Sonic followed him yet again. Infinite Sonic shot Lasers and Hyper Sonic dodged them by going behind each asteroid. But then Infinite Sonic got really mad and rushed in front of him. Then Infonite's eyes glowed Green and Hyper Sonic was surrounded in Blue glow. Hyper Sonic then punched himself. Infinite Sonic is controlling Hyper Sonic's body. Hyper Sonic was beating himself up. Then Hyper Sonic was being smashed in between asteroids until his power got weaker. Then Hyper Sonic lost some of his Super Emeralds so now he’s close to Super Sonic. Super Sonic was tried though. he sorta couldn't keep up. Infinite Sonic is just too powerful. Super Sonic flew back to the out of the asteroid belt when then Infinite Sonic grabbed him tightly and flew him to Mars again. Then Infinite Sonic threw him hard to the ground and Super Sonic lost all his powers and changed back to Sonic.
Sonic: "ouch."
Infinite Sonic picked him up and flew him back to the moon. while he was above the Moon he for last time threw Sonic the ground really hard, Sonic made a crater.
Tails: "Oh no! Infinite did this Sonic?! oh man!"
Knuckles: "I hope he’s alright!"
Everyone, even Dr. Eggman went over to Sonic.
Dr. Eggman: "I told you Sonic! You can't beat Infinite Sonic! He’s too powerful for a hedgehog like you. but I beat you for good this time. I’m taking you as my prisoner!" and same with everyone else!"
Everyone: "What?"
Infinite Sonic grabbed Sonic and flew him to the base while Dr. Eggman put everyone else to sleep and his machine took them to the base.

To Be Continued?

[Killarshark12]

Pretty good..

[AlexanderEsa]

BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!!!! more!!!!!! :D :o :lol: 8)

[Killarshark12]

Yeah, what Alex said.

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 16

Sonic was sent in a prison made only for himself. The others were in other prisons. Tails, Knuckles and Mighty was sent in an old cell.
Mighty: "great! I’m back in behind the bars...again."
Rouge: "Don't blame yourself Mighty."
Knuckles: "Rouge? Where are you?"
Knuckles: "I’m in a cell next door."
Knuckles saw a window with cell bars. Knuckles could see Rouge's face. Knuckles had a tear in his eye.
Knuckles: "Rouge!"
Knuckles quickly runs over and tries to fit his hand through the bars but it was too big. But Rouge put her hand through the bars and grabbed Knuckle’s hand.
Rouge: "I missed you sweetie!"
Knuckles: "Me too! I missed you a lot."
Mighty: "aww...is that sweet Tails? Tails?"
Tails was barfing.
Mighty: "Gross. Anyway, I’m glad you guys are back together."
Knuckles: "Yeah. where are my other friends? and why are you in a cell? I thought you were under Eggman's control?"
Rouge: "He somehow let me go and put me in this cell. Espio and Charmy are in here too."
Knuckles: "Great! I can't wait to see my buddies again too."
They all comforted each other by talking and let them think of good things instead and hope Sonic will somehow save them.

To Be Continued...

[longliveshadow]

bump

[Killarshark12]

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 17

Sonic was locked in a prison with guards and traps. There was almost no way out. Then all of the sudden he herd a voice.
Voice: ":):):):)t. over here Sonic."
Sonic looked out the window. it was Shadow.
Sonic: "Shadow? what are you doing here?"
Shadow: "To help you. I’m goanna rescue you and tell you a secret."
Sonic: "What's secret?"
Shadow: "I'll tell you when your out."
Shadow sawed through the walls and Sonic was free.
Sonic: "I could have done that a long time ago."
Shadow: "*chuckles* follow me!"
Shadow showed him to a rocket he came here with.
Shadow: "This will take us Planet Heavens."
Sonic; "Planet Heavens?"
Shadow: "I’ll tell you later."
Shadow started the rocket and it blasted towards Mars but didn't land there, it went beyond it.
Shadow: "Planet Heavens is a Planet 2,000,000,000,000,000 miles away from Pluto. It’s has all the powers you wish for."
Sonic: "Really?"
Shadow: "yep. you can get the power to defeat Infinite Sonic! I’m sure of it."
They passed Jupiter.
Sonic: "Maybe. But how did you find me?"
Shadow: "I saw you in Station Square with Tails talking about it. So I wanted to help you."
Sonic: "Thanks Shadow."
They went on for days to Planet Heavens.

To Be Continued...

[Killarshark12]

ooooooooooooOOOOOOOOoo

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 18

Tails, Knuckles and Mighty were still in their cell talking to Rouge, Espio and Charmy. Then Dr. Eggman came in the room and looked at them.
Dr. Eggman: "Take your last memories to think about being on earth, because it's goanna be gone soon. Infinite Sonic will destroy it!"
Tails: "You might be right but somehow Sonic will save it again. I know he will!"
Dr. Eggman could put his hand between the bars he punches Tails' nose.
Dr. Eggman: "Shut up foxboy! There’s no way Sonic can Stop me. He may have escaped but he still can't defeat Infinite! And That’s final!!!"
Dr. Eggman goes out and slams the door. Tails had a bit of blood dripping down his nose. Then he had a tear in his.
Tails: "Maybe Eggman is right. Maybe he is goanna win. I can't believe its true!"
Knuckles: "Don't say that Tails. There probably is a way. We just can't think of one."
Mighty: "Will just have to wait and what happens next I guess."
Rouge: "Your right."
They just waited for a while to see what would happen next, and still hoped Sonic would save them.

To Be Continued...

[Killarshark12]

I like, I like..

[umbreon2]

looks like no one gives a care about it huh?

Chapter 2

Sonic & Tails were taking a vacation in a resort in Station Square. Sonic was taking a nap while Tails was out swimming. Tails came back to get a coke. While getting a Coke, he spoke to Sonic.
Tails: "You know Sonic; you should learn how to swim these days."
Sonic: "I told you many times. Hedgehogs don't swim. We weren’t brought to this world to swim."
Tails: "Sigh...alright. Whatever."
Tails then headed back to the beach. Sonic then was about to doze, but then was woke up by Tails.
Tails: "Sonic! Sonic! Wake up!"
Sonic: "What is it Tails?"
Tails: "Follow me!"
Sonic followed Tails to the beach.
Sonic: "Well, what is it?"
Tails: "The waters too cold!"
Sonic fainted. (Anime Style) then he got up.
Sonic: "That’s it?! Don't make jokes like that again!"
Sonic stormed back to the chairs and lied down and went back to sleep. Then he was woken up again by Tails.
Tails: "Sonic! Wake up!"
Sonic: "You are fibbing again?"
Tails: "No!"
Sonic got up and followed Tails again.
Tails look over there!"
There was garbage in the ocean along with a factory pouring smoke out of its smokestacks on an island.
Sonic: "What the hake is that?"
Tails: "I don’t know, but its polluting garbage in the ocean!"
Sonic: "We have to figure this out. Come on Tails, lets go to the your Workshop and take the Cyclone!"
Tails: "Right!"
Sonic and Tails left to the Mystic Ruins.

To Be Continued...this chapter is just like the one from the old boards but it is kinda different.

[AlexanderEsa]

Let me guess knux and rouge hook up and get married at the end of the ff

[longliveshadow]

Let me guess knux and rouge hook up and get married at the end of the ffwhat do you think? Im not telling you.

[longliveshadow]

opps, sorry for not putting new chapters. im such an idiot.


Chapter 19

Sonic and Shadow were still traveling far. They got to Pluto in 2 days. It was still a long way to go. They reached Planet Heavens 5 days later.
Sonic: "Finally!"
The place was awesome! It had pink clouds and harps everywhere and angels flying everywhere. It was a really peaceful place. There was a gate up ahead of them. It was huge. it was at least 6 stories high.
Sonic: "Is that where GOD is?"
Shadow: "Yep."
Sonic and Shadow went through the gate. Then they saw a giant hedgehog above them. It was golden with sliver strips all over. It was 50 ft. tall.
Sonic: "Whoa! That is one big Hedgehog!"
Shadow: "Yep. That’s GOD."
Sonic: "GOD?"
GOD: "Yes, little hedgehog."
Sonic: "I’m Sonic."
GOD: "Right."
Shadow: "I brought Sonic here because he needs your help. Dr. Eggman created a robot that can beat Sonic up good. He needs a power from you to beat him."
GOD: "Indeed. Well, let’s see. I'll give you the power of Hero!"
Sonic: "Power of Hero?"
GOD: "Yes Sonic. It’s when you show Heroic things evil people can not handle or resist. That’s the only thing that can stop this robot. I believe there’s no other way to stop him except this power. And only once, I’ll give it to you to defeat Him."
Sonic: "Wow! Thanks GOD!"
Sonic and Shadow left.
GOD: "Good Luck!"
Shadow: "This is great Sonic. Looks like we can beat Infinite Sonic After all. But wait, you probably still need the Chaos and Super Emeralds."
Sonic: "Why?"
Shadow: "Because then in case you get hit, you won't get badly injured. Its better then being Sonic. Where did you last Have the Chaos and Super Emeralds?"
Sonic: "Well, I lost my Super Emeralds in the Asteroid Belt and the Chaos Emeralds on Mars."
Shadow: "Man! we got to get going now!"
Sonic and Shadow left Planet Heavens in their Rocket.

To Be Continued...

[Killarshark12]

Pretty good.

[Espio 9]

Pretty good? Really good!
Hi I'm Espio

[Espio 9]

Pretty good? Really good!
Hi I'm Espio

[AlexanderEsa]

brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :lol:

[Whitewolf37]

love the story, that part with Knux an' Nack was pretty funny

[longliveshadow]

thank you people for your support. i hope theres more. :) as thanks for your support, here 2 chapters.

Chapter 20

Sonic and Shadow went to the Asteroid Belt first to look for the Super Emeralds. They saw where they all were. They left that area and went to Mars. They found the Chaos Emeralds there too. They left back to the moon. Then, they saw a shuttle coming from the moon to Earth.
Sonic: "I hope it’s not what I think it is."
Then there was Infinite Sonic racing behind the shuttle.
Shadow: "Yep. It is."
Sonic: "We got to hurry Shadow. or the world will be destroyed!"
Shadow: "Right! Let’s go!"
Shadow moved the rocket faster to the earth.

To Be Continued...

Chapter 21

Sonic and Shadow arrived at earth and saw Infinite Sonic Destroying Station Square. Buildings were on fire, some Buildings were collapsed also.
Sonic: "Great. We got here a little too late."
Dr. Eggman: "You sure did Sonic! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Dr. Eggman was in his machine in front of them.
Dr. Eggman: "I told you Infinite Sonic will destroy the world. Station Square will nearly be destroyed Then will destroy other Cites! And on all of its ruins, I'll build Eggmanland! The world of my creation! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Dr. Eggman left still laughing.
Shadow: "Its time Sonic! turn into Hyper Sonic!"
Sonic: "Right!"
Sonic turned into Hyper Sonic again with the Emeralds.
Shadow: "Now remember. Just keep fighting till he’s a bit weak and then use your power!"
Hyper Sonic: "Ok Shadow! Thanks for everything!"
Hyper Sonic flew out in Downtown Station Square. He found Infinite Sonic shooting laser at the people on the streets.
Hyper Sonic: "Infinite! Stop hurting people!"
Infinite Stopped and glared at Hyper Sonic. Dr. Eggman flew his machine next to his creation.
Dr. Eggman: "Don't bother Sonic! You lost last time! what makes you think you'll beat him this time?"
Hyper Sonic: "You'll find out."

To Be Continued...

[longliveshadow]

bump

[Killarshark12]

Excellent. No flaws.

[longliveshadow]

really? cool! :D

[shadowblast]

your story is the best ive read! i cant wait to see what happens next

[longliveshadow]

boy, i haven't got this much attension since ever!

[AlexanderEsa]

MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :lol:

[Killarshark12]

NEXT CHP

[shadowblast]

cant.............. take suspense .....any longer ....

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 22

Hyper Sonic shot a laser ball at Infinite Sonic. It got hit, but it didn't give up. It flew really fast to Hyper Sonic and slashed him. Hyper Sonic got a cut but He felt no pain.
Hyper Sonic: "You can do better then that!"
Hyper Sonic flew away while Infinite followed and shot laser balls at him, but he kept missing. Then Infinite Sonic stopped and used Psychic Powers on Hyper Sonic. Hyper Sonic was frozen. He then was being brought to Infinite Sonic. Then Infinite Sonic punched Hyper Sonic many times. Then he controlled him to a building a smashed him inside. Hyper Sonic looked like in pain. Then Infinite Sonic dropped him on the streets.
Hyper Sonic: "Ouch! hesss soo tough. Can't beat himmm."
Hyper Sonic's powers got weaken to Super Sonic. Just like last time. Then Super Sonic got up and flew into Infinite Sonic. Infinite Sonic got blasted up in the air. Then Infinite flew back down and picked up Super Sonic and threw him to another building.
Shadow: "No! Sonic! Don't give up!"
Super Sonic didn't give up. He knew it was time to show his power. He shot out a Pillow at Infinite Sonic. It was sacred of the pillow.
Super Sonic: "Its working!"
Then Infinite Sonic snapped out of it and Kicked Super Sonic up in the air. Super Sonic weakly went back down and shot and Played a Harp. Infinite Sonic couldn't stand the music. Infinite Sonic then put its finger up and gave him and electric shock. It didn't work.
Super Sonic: "I’m already full of electric stupid bolt! HAHAHA!!!"
Infinite Sonic then quickly smashed Super Sonic several time on the wall and threw him hard to the ground again. then Super Sonic's powers were lost and he was Sonic again.
Sonic: "Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!"
Shadow: "Sonic! you still have the Hero power! use it! all of it!"
Sonic: "Right!"
Sonic then charged up something in his hand and griped it. Infinite Sonic also charged Something in its claws, a laser ball. Sonic was making a Lighting shaped thing.
Sonic: "I got a Zeus Arrow here! are you afraid Infinite?"
Infinite Sonic just blasted the laser ball while Sonic threw the Lighting at the ball. it caused a Big explosion! There was smoke around the city.
Shadow: "I can't see! what’s going on?"
What did the attack hit? who will be the survival from the explosion?

To Be Continued...

[longliveshadow]

BTW, starting this Wedensday, i will not be able to post more chapters. ( vacation) So the next Chapter won't come probably till next Sunday or Monday. sorry... :(

[takerutakaishi]

hmmm... how long are the chapters? i might consider reading this sometime...

[longliveshadow]

takerutakaishi! it's been a while. anyway, some chapters are bigger then this one.

[takerutakaishi]

good. i'll probably read this on wednesday. i have a report due that day, and i haven't started yet! stupid Mrs. Allen...

COMMENCING READING!!

READING COMMENCED AND COMPLETED!!

[Killarshark12]

Can you post chapter today?

[shadowblast]

how lonig is your vacation?

[Killarshark12]

Til Next sunday or monday, he said.

[takerutakaishi]

I love it! But my eyes are a bit "tried" from reading all the chapters in an hour. Only 25 chapters? good thing theres a sequel. I hope your remaining 3 chapters will be as wonderful and long as previous ones.
RATING SO FAR: A-

[longliveshadow]

thank you. and im back from New Orleans (thats where i've been) Anyway, heres the next chapter. thanks for the comment. and thanks for waiting.

Chapter 23

After the smoke cleared, They saw Sonic and Infinite Sonic still standing. Sonic fainted, because he was really tried. Infinite Sonic is a little weak too. They both stood there weakly starring at each other.
Shadow: "I hope Sonic wins."
Dr. Eggman: "Hang in there Infinite. You almost defeated Sonic one time, Now you can defeat him for good!"
Infinite Sonic looked at Sonic. Sonic had starches and burses everywhere from the battle. Sonic was also gasping for breath. Infinite Sonic stood pondering. Then he sparks came around him.
Dr. Eggman: "Huh?"
Infinite Sonic's Green eyes then turned dim, and he fell to the ground. He deactivated himself.
Dr. Eggman: "What! I can't believe this! He deactivated himself?! What a complete Idiot!"
Sonic saw that Infinite Sonic was turned off.
Sonic: "Yes! I won."
Dr. Eggman: "Bahh!!! No matter! I'll destroy Station Square and the world anyway."
Dr. Eggman then got out a little device and presses a button. Then from the moon came a pointy rocket out of it. Dr. Eggman was goanna destroy earth with a rocket!
Dr. Eggman: "This rocket will be here in 4 minutes and 6 seconds. Don't even try and stop it! You will be too late if you tried."
Sonic: "Oh no! Shadow, we gotta go and stop the rocket before it destroys earth!"
Shadow: "Ok!"
They quickly changed into Hyper Sonic and Hyper Shadow and flew quickly up in the sky.

To Be Continued...

[takerutakaishi]

hmm.... always using that same tried/tired mistake. i think its become your trademark. though this chapter supplies some twists, its progressing a little too fast. Sonic and Shadow turning hyper in an instant without anything seems a little wierd, but I might need to refresh my memory of this fan fic. My rating stands.

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 24

Hyper Sonic and Hyper Shadow flew quickly to the rocket.
Hyper Sonic: "You destroy it Shadow! I’m already weak from the last battle."
Hyper Shadow: "Sounds good."
Hyper Shadow flew toward the rocket and used Chaos Control, but the rocket was too big to be teleported. The rocket was closer to earth now.
Hyper Shadow: "I know what I should do."
Hyper Shadow quickly goes down to earth and gets a hot dog. Then he comes back up.
Hyper Sonic: "You are lame."
Hyper Shadow finishes the hot dog.
Hyper Shadow: "Just watch me."
Hyper Shadow quickly rushes under the rocket. Then after he ate the Hot Dog, his muscles got pumped.
Hyper Shadow: "I’m goanna throw your rocket to the next dimension and time Eggman!"
Hyper Shadow grabs the rocket and slows it down. Rocket was still going while Hyper Shadow was still breaking it. Shadow pushed it harder and it got a little slower. The rocket was now 1 mile above Station Square. Hyper Shadow was still slowing it down. it got a little slower, but then Hyper Shadow used his rocket shoes to slow it down even more. Then it Hyper Shadow landed to the ground holding the rocket up. Then he threw it hi in the sky and it disappeared in space. Hyper Sonic landed on Station Square too.
Hyper Sonic: "Amazing! but what hot dog was it that you bought?
Hyper Shadow: "It was a protein Hot Dog. And also I’ve been working out for a few years."
Hyper Sonic: "Awesome Shadow! you saved the world."
Hyper Sonic high fives him.
Hyper Shadow: "No, WE saved the world. you’re the one that destroy a powerful creature of all time!"
Hyper Sonic: "Thanks Shadow."
Hyper Sonic and Hyper Shadow then turned back to normal.
Dr. Eggman: "No!!!!!!!!! I can't believe it!!!! I hate you Sonic!!! I hate you!"
Sonic: "Tsk tsk tsk. You'll never learn Eggbutt. I’m better then you in everything. get over it!"
Dr. Eggman: "No! never. I’m not giving up! I'll be back! I'll destroy you for good next time!"
Shadow: "Shut your mouth fats!"
Shadow then kicked Dr. Eggman high in the air till he disappeared in the sky.
Sonic: "Wow! you really are strong Shadow!"
Shadow: "Good thing I do workout and ate that protein hot dog."
Sonic: "Come on. Let’s get everyone."
Shadow: "Ok."
Sonic and Shadow got in the ship Dr. Eggman used earlier and released, Tails, Knuckles, Rouge, Mighty, Espio and Charmy.
Charmy: "You guys rule!"
Espio: "You're awesome on beating that robot AND saving the world in one day."
Sonic: "Yep. Come on! Were going on vacation!"
Everyone: "Yeah!!!

To Be Continued…

[takerutakaishi]

i love it! but, since all problems are solved, whats on the 25th chapter? so many questions...
GRADE REVISED: 94%, or A-

[longliveshadow]

Chapter 25

They were all back at the resort in Station Square on the beach. Sonic was having a drink while Tails, Knuckles, Rouge, Mighty, Charmy and Espio go for a swim. Shadow was with Sonic resting on the beach.
Sonic: "Did a great job Shadow!"
Shadow: "Thanks Sonic. You ruled too."
Then Dr. Eggman appeared dirty with anger in his face.
Dr. Eggman: "You haven't herded the last of Infinite Sonic! He will be back. He will beat the crap out of you! he will..."
Everyone: "Ahh Shut up Eggman!"
Shadow: "We are tried of you now. You’re boring."
Dr. Eggman: "I’m boring? Bahh! I don't care!"
Then all of the sudden Mecha Sonic (from Sonic & Knuckles) came and fired missiles at Dr. Eggman. It was mad for not being used again like his other creations.
Dr. Eggman: "Ahhh!!! Stop it! You’re hurting me! Ow!"
Mecha Sonic chased Dr. Eggman away. Everyone laughed.
Rouge: "That Egghead is really funny and a weirdo."
Knuckles: "You can say that."
They all enjoyed their vacation at the resort for weeks.
Meanwhile...
Back at Dr. Eggman's base, he was crying, complaining and throwing a tantrum.
Dr. Eggman: "I was so close! So close for world order! I’m goanna have to think big again!"
Dr. Eggman then quickly went to his books and studied what to do next for his next plans.

The End

[longliveshadow]

so, what did people think?

[takerutakaishi]

normally, i would give the whole story a report, but im too "tried" to do it. but i liked the last chapter. wasn't as good as the other ones, but hey, thats fanfic authors for ya...

[longliveshadow]

look, im sorry about the "tried" thing. this ff was made last summer and i never re-edit it since. now that this is finsihed, wait until it's sequal, which was finished last November. It's more deep and a bit more descriptive then this.

[takerutakaishi]

i can already read the first or second chapters of the third one. i found it while browsing here.

[longliveshadow]

i saw. wish you didn't bump it. I'm not working on the 3rd one until i finish posting the 2nd one

[takerutakaishi]

sorry i bumped it again, i didn't see your post. oh well, you can edit it or delete it and tell people not to read it

[uhhsam]

cool

[longliveshadow]

why must you bump this sucky peice of work i did?