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valenci
02-25-2004, 11:49 AM
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Sonic characters. They belong to Sega and the other companies that want to claim them.
Here I am, yet again with another fan fic. I KNOW that this storyline of ‘Sonic is sick and is near dying’ has been used over hundreds of times but I wanted to get in on the action. Hopefully, this will stand out above the rest.



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NOTE: This is in Tails’ point of view.

Undeniable pain, excruciating anguish, and unbearable sorrow. These six words—along with some others—could only provide a brief glimpse into the inner sanctums of my heart. Ever since my best friend Sonic became diagnosed with the sickness life as I knew it before then ceased to exist, now only a comforting memory of how it used to be. From that time on, my life has been filled with heartache. No one could ever blame me for feeling this way; it would be entirely blasphemous to do so. The loss of a cherished companion always causes these feelings to resurrect out of someone’s inner being. The strange part is, Sonic is not gone just yet but he might as well be; he isn’t getting any better and I don’t ever expect him to do so.

You see, a couple of years ago Sonic was stricken with a debilitating disease that rendered him totally disabled. He became bedridden, not even being able to talk without instantly tiring himself out. Astronomically high fevers and re-occurring bouts with bronchitis and other ailments already trouble his already diminishing health. I suppose that the only thing that is prolonging his life is the numerous amount of medication he ahs to ingest on a daily basis. As with any other medication, it costs money—money that neither Sonic or I could afford on out monthly allowances we received from the government for our prior services to protect their capital city of Station Square from Robotnik’s many tirades. For this reason, I had to take a job as a dishwasher as a local restaurant, nothing entirely fancy. However, this lowly occupation paid for only a small fraction of the medication, about one quarter of it I suppose. And of course, if you don’t have to money to pay for something, you don’t get it. This was such a case.

Even though he received most of his required medications everyone knew, including me, that all of this was only delaying the inevitable, he was going to die. There only seemed to be one way to reverse this horrific trend; some sort of a miracle. I never believed in such things; they always seemed to just be simple occurrences, nothing fancy. Yet, there was still some hope in my heart; maybe miracles WERE possible. Maybe—just maybe it would all work out for him in the end. So, the question still remains unanswered, can miracles happen?


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I like this chapter. I’m sorry that this is so short (and somewhat crappy) It may sound like Sonic and Tails are an er… couple but that’s not the case. They’re like brothers… Yeah… brothers…. :wink:

uhhsam
02-25-2004, 11:51 AM
how did you say crappy?! is crap uncensored?!

...nope...

Ashura5000
02-25-2004, 01:31 PM
Nifty. (Did I just say that? :shock: )
This looks like it has a good start, but no real sign of a plot yet. That's about the only bad thing I can think off, but it's only the intro chapter, so it's to be expected, right?

valenci
02-25-2004, 01:38 PM
Yeah. The first chapter of most of my fanfics don't set the plot for the story. Thanks for the compliment! ^ ^ The actual plot is: Tails, with the help of others (mostly Amy and Princess Sally, who argue a lot over who Sonic loves ^ ^) try to save Sonic from perishing from an unknown sickness. Sonic is sickly, doesn't talk much (thank God), and moans a lot. That's basically it.

Ashura5000
02-25-2004, 01:40 PM
Oh ok, thanks.

valenci
02-25-2004, 01:44 PM
Thanks? For what?

Ashura5000
02-25-2004, 01:46 PM
For telling me the plot.

(BTW, New Hazardous Globe chap is up!)

Killarshark12
02-25-2004, 02:20 PM
Cool. Waiting for next Chapter

valenci
03-01-2004, 07:38 AM
*BUMPIES!*

Eyedye
03-02-2004, 08:51 AM
Oh hell yes!!!! Let Sonic DIIIE! MWAHAHA... HA! :twisted: :twisted:
I like so far. :twisted:

Queenhypershadow
03-02-2004, 06:14 PM
poor Sonic. :(

darkestmushroom
03-03-2004, 05:55 PM
yes how poor poor, mmmmm i like saying that word poor....

Queenhypershadow
03-03-2004, 06:38 PM
Tails too. I felt a little sorry for him.

Eyedye
03-04-2004, 10:10 PM
Why the pity? I enjoy the sorrow.

valenci
03-05-2004, 06:03 AM
Me too. :mrgreen:

I'm working on the next chapter.

TEASERS: It involves washing dishes, grease, Amy bashing, moaning, slum areas, urine and feces. ;)

Killarshark12
03-05-2004, 05:05 PM
*shivers* Ooough..

Queenhypershadow
03-05-2004, 06:02 PM
like the sound of that new chapter!

Killarshark12
03-05-2004, 06:21 PM
Ouugh..

Eyedye
03-05-2004, 08:55 PM
And an added note. I'm going to lock Valencia away for teasing us.

Killarshark12
03-06-2004, 10:22 AM
Lol..Can I shoot her? Please? Just one shot before you do that? :mrgreen:

Eyedye
03-06-2004, 10:26 AM
Oh... go on then! :twisted:

Killarshark12
03-06-2004, 10:28 AM
*takes out rocket launcher* *hits valenci into a spiked wall* I shiver...with eXCItMEnt! :twisted:

valenci
03-08-2004, 07:22 AM
0_0 *runs away and hides* And to torture you some more...

Chapter preview!

My hands ached terribly as I picked up another dish, scrubbing it with a moldy sponge until I could see my wretched reflection in its somewhat clean surface. The restaurant was abuzz with activity, sweaty waitresses coming in the kitchen for food the cooks most likely dropped on the ground or spit on even though it was totally against the sanitation code, balding cooks frying fish or french fries in grease used over a hundred times, and in the middle of it all was Miles Prower, hunched over, arms elbow deep in filthy water cleaning off grese covered dishes for five measly bucks an hour. This was totally the pits, I had only decided to take this job since no one else would hire a fifteen year old kid, except pimps looking for new prostitutes of course. So, it was either washing dishes or doing disgusting things with other men under the cover of darkness. I chose the former.

Man, this would be a bad way to live wouldn't it? *feels sorry for Tails*:(

Eyedye
03-08-2004, 03:46 PM
Ok, now I imagine pimp daddy Tails. Due to that comment...

Killarshark12
03-08-2004, 04:59 PM
*shoots valenci 200029 times* *smoke comes outta nostrils with every breath*

tailsrulz
03-08-2004, 05:18 PM
:shock: Your fanfic writing shows awesomeness yet again I'm NoT WorThY

Killarshark12
03-08-2004, 05:22 PM
I'm less worthy than you. Now...I'm bored. I wanna make Alexhocking breakdance again..but yet, you'll do *casts spell that makes you breakdance at the speed of light* :mrgreen: Damn...that guy's legs are on hinges..

valenci
03-09-2004, 06:24 AM
:shock: Your fanfic writing shows awesomeness yet again I'm NoT WorThYI'm not worthy of your drawing expertise! *looks sad* Uh, the secret is.... I just kept writing and kept writing unitl I got this far. Now if I just could do this for drawing...

valenci
03-09-2004, 06:31 AM
Ok, now I imagine pimp daddy Tails. Due to that comment...LMAO! :lol: Pimp Daddy Tails... Hmm... I like that idea... *writes idea down for later use*

tailsrulz
03-09-2004, 03:44 PM
Hmm... I can't write and you can't draw... apart we are weak, BUT TOGETHER WE COULD BE THE DUO OF STORYS AND ILLUSTRATIONS! I SAY WE SHOULD MAKE A SONIC FANCOMIC DAMN IT!

Killarshark12
03-09-2004, 06:04 PM
Alls I got ta offer is detail and comedy :mrgreen:

Eyedye
03-11-2004, 03:59 PM
Show me the chapter... go on... you know you want to...

Killarshark12
03-11-2004, 05:57 PM
Yeah, show me da chp!

valenci
03-12-2004, 07:17 AM
Hmm... I can't write and you can't draw... apart we are weak, BUT TOGETHER WE COULD BE THE DUO OF STORYS AND ILLUSTRATIONS! I SAY WE SHOULD MAKE A SONIC FANCOMIC DAMN IT!For now I can't draw... *picks up her figure drawing and colored pencil coloring techniques books and starts to read and draw examples of what she sees* ^ ^

As for the fancomic... I would be honored to do so! I've always wanted to work with comic books! *Eh, I wanted to be the artist, not the writer but until my drawing improves (which won't be long...) I shall be stuck with writing*

And, since I've been trying to improve my drawing skills, (which are getting a little better) and working on about a ZILLION school projects I haven't been working on this fic lately. I AM writing out my chapter outlines for this fic though since I have found out that it helps me write better and I ACTUALLY CAN HAVE A PLOT! So, don't worry, the chapter will be out soon...

Killarshark12
03-13-2004, 08:47 AM
*yyyawwn* *BUUUMP*

tailsrulz
03-14-2004, 04:49 PM
Hmm... I can't write and you can't draw... apart we are weak, BUT TOGETHER WE COULD BE THE DUO OF STORYS AND ILLUSTRATIONS! I SAY WE SHOULD MAKE A SONIC FANCOMIC DAMN IT!For now I can't draw... *picks up her figure drawing and colored pencil coloring techniques books and starts to read and draw examples of what she sees* ^ ^

As for the fancomic... I would be honored to do so! I've always wanted to work with comic books! *Eh, I wanted to be the artist, not the writer but until my drawing improves (which won't be long...) I shall be stuck with writing*

And, since I've been trying to improve my drawing skills, (which are getting a little better) and working on about a ZILLION school projects I haven't been working on this fic lately. I AM writing out my chapter outlines for this fic though since I have found out that it helps me write better and I ACTUALLY CAN HAVE A PLOT! So, don't worry, the chapter will be out soon...lol, I wanted to be a writer, but since I never finished anything (and how our English teacher makes it so BORING in her class), I've gave up on it and went to drawing. And the wierd thing is I've never taken art lessons or read those "How to draw, paint, ink, etc." books. It's weird... It must've been my genes... but my family aren't "artistically liberated".

Killarshark12
03-14-2004, 04:51 PM
My grade for this ff:

B-

valenci
03-15-2004, 06:29 AM
My grade for this ff:

B-Yeah, it deserves it. I'm not too proud of this fanfic (the prologue I mean)

Killarshark12
03-15-2004, 06:01 PM
eh, at least your other had an A.

Eyedye
03-16-2004, 01:46 AM
I'm on a Fire and Stabbing frenzy, so excuse me if you wake up with a few extra holes across your body.

tailsrulz
03-19-2004, 05:37 PM
My grade for English class:

C+

And I deserve it too. No wonder why my Fanfics weren't great.
It would've been a B- too, but she thought I cheated on an SOB... I mean SOP.

Killarshark12
03-19-2004, 05:40 PM
*locks on to Eyedye stabbing a corpse with Killar Sniper Rifle* The most deadliest rifle to offer in Hell. That's why they named it after me. Of course, that was after the how-many-corpses-can-you-shoot contest. *pulls trigger* *PUEW* and... *it hits Eyedye in the head*

valenci
05-03-2004, 11:34 AM
Um, this fic is now... CANCELLED. I got SO MANY BAD REVIEWS on this fic (at ff.net) so it has lowered my self esteem down to nothing on this fic. If you guys want me to continue it I will need your support...