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Duncan52
02-29-2004, 05:24 PM
Sonic GZ


Part 1


its been 7 years sense Eggmans demise into the other world. Sonic has become a wanderer,Tails is a well known scientist in Station Square,Rouge has become the presidents bodyguard and jewel hunter,Knuckles is now Earths guardian,Fang the sniper is still robbing banks,Amy Rose,Cream and Big all are living in Station Sqaure,the Chaotix are still detectives and Shadow is training in space to become the worlds fastest creature. and defeat Sonic in combat someday aswell.


Sonic is wandering into the heart of old Metropolis. its been months sense he's been home and decides to have some fun by entering a race with creatures all over the planet. but theres one probelm a mysterious looking robot has entered the race as well and seems to have his eyes set on Sonic.

Episode 1 Part 1:"a race to the stars"

Sonic: it looks like this crumy race might be fun after all. turns out theres alot of fast looking guys around here. i just hope they can atleast keep up with me so i can have a bit of a challenge.

announcer:will all the contestants please come to your starting marks the race is about to commence!

Sonic: well. i guess nows the time for me to show off my speed in front of these slow pokes.

*a robot with a thick egg shaped armor surrounding him came up to Sonic and purposely bumped into him*

Sonic: HEY! watch it pal! the race hasnt started yet!

mysterious robot: silence fool! i will beat you in this race! and once i do i will be claimed fastest thing on Earth! you stand no chance Sonic!

Sonic: how do you know my name,pal? the judge hasnt given out the racers names yet.

mysterious robot: lets just say i've raced you before in the past. but this time i'll be the one winning! not you!

Sonic: whatever. i just want the race to start. im getting impatient.

*DOO DOO DOOOOOOOOOO!*

mysterious robot: thats the racers cue. well good luck Sonic. you'll need it. mmm hahahahaha........*walks away*

Sonic: what was that all about?

announcer: well folks looks like a nice day today doesnt it. a perfect day to have a race. all around the globe this race will take place in 6 diffrent countrys! they will be osaka,austrila,new metropolis,capital city,here,china and end in Station Sqaure! now lets name our racers! we have Grogerge ollooas,Max johnson,David callaway,the robot named Mecha,Sonic the hedgehog,Bill O Riley, and the Brock! will all racers go to starter line up!

Sonic: oh yeah! lets get thsi race started!

announcer: on your marks! get set!...........GO!

*Sonic races out in the lead along with all the other racers. Max and David in the lead. the two men start pushing each other around in such a frantic that even Sonic trys to stay clear of it. the mysterious robot aka Mecha ends up burning such much dust and fire through the begining of the race that the others cant see or catch up and immedately drop out. while Sonic pulls cloes behind max and David who are fighting while running at 200mph. Sonic trys to over pass them but Mecha ends up burning rubber in Sonics face making him unable to see a thing. Mecha pulls out in the lead. as the mysterious armored up robot races at 200 to 450 in under 3.2 seconds. Sonic amazed and not believeing what he's seeing unleashes some more speed and goes from 150 to 450mph in under just 5 seconds. running through Mechas dust Sonic makes it up front next to him as he recently passed up Max and David who eventually stopped fighting but at that time was over 300 miles behind Sonic and Mecha so they automatically dropped out of the race. Sonic caught up to Mecha and began to start a conversation with him while racing.*

Sonic: so Mecha. i see we've already passed up 3 of the countrys we've been racing threw.

Mecha: and your point?

Sonic: all the other racers have dropped out. its just me and you. and im pretty sure the winners gonna be me!

Mecha: dont be so sure of yourself Sonic. i have something up my sleves or as you could say armor.

Sonic: oh! and what might that be?

*Mecha pulls out a Chaos Emerald from out of his armor and jacks it to his metallic cable in his back. immedately his turbo boosters pop out on both sides of his legs and begins going from 450 to 1000mph under 4.5 seconds*

Sonic:whoa! talk about fast! i've never seen a robot go that fast before in my life! but since he's using a Chaos Emerald it wouldnt hurt if i used one of my trump cards.*Sonic pulls out a ring from his left shoe and grasp it in his fist. he then starts glowing and his velocity around him increases. a giant spin dash sheild morphs over Sonic as he begins to hover over the ground*OH YEAH! BABY! nows the time to show that robot true SuperSonic speed!

*Sonic goes from 500 to 600 to 800 to 1000 till he ends up passing up Mecha right ahead of him by going 15000mph*

Mecha: NO! how was he able to catch up with me?!? if my calculations are right you shouldnt even be this fast in your normal state!

Sonic: well Mecha. theres something you dont know about me and thats i can use a power rings full power to make me go at speeds i cant normally go! as you can see this cant be cheating since your wiped out your Chaos Emerald first.

Mecha: you'll lose! you cant defeat me! NO NOT AGAIN!*Mecha ends up absorbing lots fo Chaos Emerald energy by the seconds*

Sonic: NO! if you absorb to much energy you could explode!

Mecha: it doesnt matter so long as i beat you in this race!

Sonic: why are you so determined to beat me in this race?! who are you?!?!

Mecha: think hard Sonic! go back to the days Dr.Eggman had his Death Egg. once you relize who i am the race will be over and you'll have lost! mmmHAHAHAHHAHA!

Sonic: your crazy! oh no! the finish line is just 12 short miles away from us i can see Station Sqaure in the distance!

Mecha: you are no longer Earths fastest thing alive Sonic the hedgehog!*Mecha ends up going faster then the speed of light and is ahead of Sonic by 3 miles.Sonic quickly trys to catch up and they both run evenly till there only 3 feet from the checkered finish line.*

Sonic: oh no you dont! im Sonic the hedgehog!*Sonics feet start to blaze in a cycle*and im the.......only........fastest thing.......alive.....on Earth.....only.......MEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!*Sonic is a blue streak and ends up easily out running Mecha by only sqaure feet and crosses the finish line before Mecha thus being clamed world wide the fastest thing alive on Earth. people circle them and start cheering for Sonic with confetty coming down all over him everywhere. Mecha walks away in the distance before Sonic can say anything to him he's gone.*

Sonic: hmmmmm......i wonder who that robot was after all? oh well does it really matter im now claimed the worlds fastest thing alive which really gives me some cool bragging rights!

Mecha: *sitting on a building above next to the party going down on the street. Mecha gets up and stands on the edge* you may have now won two races Sonic the hedgehog! but mark my words i will become the worlds fastest thing alive! even if it means taking drastic measures! i will beat you! i swear it!*the robot takes off its helmet revilling to have a robotic head that looks just like Sonic. then he turns around and walks away*

END Episode 1 Part 1

Killarshark12
02-29-2004, 05:28 PM
ok, but could use some punctuation work and little more description. I couldn't make out what you were sayin in some of da sentences..

Duncan52
02-29-2004, 05:38 PM
okay.

Killarshark12
02-29-2004, 05:41 PM
yeah, well, other than that, it's going to be pretty decent.

Swift_the_slacker
02-29-2004, 05:49 PM
It's okay

Killarshark12
03-06-2004, 11:22 AM
*bump* *zzz*

uhhsam
07-15-2004, 07:28 AM
:D

Espio 9
07-15-2004, 07:36 AM
:shock: