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Silim
04-17-2009, 07:02 PM
Prolouge

"Meh, you're goin' away again?" The young beast leaned back in his chair and yawned. Short, red hair and long, pointy beast ears where the only thing his sister could see of him because she was standing behind his chair.
"It won't be long this time, Silim. Once I'm back, we will train again. You want to be a guardian too, right?" She said with a soft voice.
"'Course I want to! I will become one of the best Guardians of all time, just wait!" The child replyed, jumping out of the chair and smiling into the face of his older sister. "Take care, Sariah."

...7 years later...

"Heh... it's crazy how time flows by, right?" Silim stood on the fourth floor of Clyez City. The hair of the beast was still a pure mess, standing in all directions. Just like the hair of the other beast that stood beside him, just that this one had smaller ears. And was overall way smaller, because he was a 'small beast'.
"Seven years, right? Man, it was sure hard. Becomin' a guardian and all, without your sister around. But we did it, man. We're Guardians now - and we will find her. Right?" The smaller beast with the name Joony had his hands behind his head and yawned. "But first, we should fetch somethin' to eat and our own clothes. This guardian uniforms are nothin' for me, I tell ya. Now come on!" Joony walked off, towards the lift. Silim stood there for some seconds alone.
'Jeah... it was hard. You never came back, Sariah... I never saw you again. Where are you, sister? Just why didn't you come back?' With the right hand, he fixed the position of his glases on his nose, then he followed his friend Joony. 'We will find you, sister. No matter what it takes. I swear it by my own axe.'







Character Information

Silim
One of the protagonists of the story. He is 17 years old and just became a Guardian, after intense training. His friend, Joony, is almost always by his side. After his sister disappeared on a mission when he was 10 years old, he wanted to become a Guardian even more so that he could find and rescue her. He still believes that she is alive. His fighting style consists out of large, heavy weapons for both melee and ranged combat, you could call him a Protranser. For emergencies, he always carries some Star Atomizers and EX Traps.

Joony
Joony is a small beast and looks very much like a small version of Silim himself. They've been friends since they where childs, but even though they look so much alike, they're not related to each other. After Sariah disappeared, he swore that he would help his friend in his quest to find her. His fighting style consists mainly of giant swords, he may look small, but he's strong enough to lift up a giant rock without Nanoblasting. His swords are bigger then he is himself, and because he sometimes seems to disappear beneath monsters and only his weapon seems to remain, he is called the 'bladed Tornado' on Moatoob, mainly in his hometown where he and Silim trained long and protected the city from monsters. You could call him a Fighmaster.

Crim
A mysterious cast that joines Silim and Joony in the beginning of their first mission. His body is completely dark red with some red marks and spikes on his shoulders, also on his robotiv face wich has dark blue eyes. He is what you could call a Fighgunner, always using small, accurate weapons to deal single, devasting blows to his enemies. His reasons for teaming up with the friends remains a secret... for now.

Force
Who he is? You will know soon enough.








This was it for the Prolouge of my first PSU fanfic. Pleae note that english is my second language, so my grammar and spelling may not be perfect. Sorry about that.

Tellu
07-07-2009, 12:03 AM
I think the introduction felt too fast. What you probably should've done was include the "7 years later" part in chapter one to give us a little more time to adjust to the change of pace in the story. I think that the profiles should stay where they are, just before the next half of it.