Poor Foot Soldiers

[halo2_devil_11194]

Every time I die
I come back alive
And try to survive


I get Polverized
In the heat of battle
with a bone crunching rattle


all of a sudden im dead
I think i need a med
Ether that or im just crazy in the head


Even though i run
i still get killed by an 8 ton gun


now that its done im going away
for the day
Even though i still want to play

plese consider that this is my first poem and im not very good but i wanted to try it

[Ringtails]

Hmm... Very interesting...

It looks like we both took the same challenge and posted a poem within a minute of each other...

Very good for a first! Keep up the good work!

[Arrowatch]

For a first poem, good. I enjoyed. Thoroughly. Good on ya, dude.

[halo2_devil_11194]

forgot idea created by arrowatch