sniper battle

[blackwolf037]

-this post had been attacked by the members of g-4-
morgan webb and adam sesslar give it a -50q9301931 out of 5

[MonkeykingZX]

Erm that was ok, but there was a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Also you don't need to repeat names you used "brooke" too many times once would have been enough, after that the "enemies cockpit or just pit" would've sufficed

[sledge2594]

Spell check. I'd give it an F +

[blackwolf037]

w00t. now to delete it all. :-) im such a horrible writer. time to ive it a bad vote