Conversation Between BessDreamer and Theadvisor1234

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  1. Yep. That's Default Sonic, unless something is noticably different (which it will be, but for good reasons).
  2. Lol. That's the Sonic I know and love. XD ^^
  3. He's just being Sonic. You know, the typical laid back guy.
  4. I've read the second chapter. ^^ I enjoyed it also. I like how Knuckles isn't acting overly moody and serious. Plus, I love the idea of him able to explore the world now. It could fit perfectly into an actual Sonic game. The only criticism I have is it's somewhat difficult to tell what a character's emotions/expressions are in certain scenes. Like this one,

    Sonic: HEY, KNUX! GOT ANY GOOD LANDING STRIPS AROUND HERE?

    I'm not sure in what way Sonic is shouting to Knuckles from The Tornado.
  5. You're welcome. ^^ I'm gonna read the 2nd chapter now.
  6. Thanks. Let me know what you think of the rest of it.
  7. I finished reading the first chapter. It is very well-written and everyone's personalities is accurate. My favorite scene so far is the conversation between Dr.Eggman and the commander in prison. I really felt the emotions coming from both of them and imagining the scene in my mind. ^^
  8. Alright. ^^ I'm going to read it now.
  9. No problem. Let me know what you think.
  10. Thank you very much! ^^
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