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    ****APOLOGIES FOR LAYOUT - WAS ORIGINALLY WRITTEN IN WORDPAD****
    Just a little character background I threw together, I'll add more speech and depth later on. Feel free to rate as you wish, I think I may have added a few too many memorable characters in so far such as Dallgun and Curtz.

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    Tucker

    Name: Athrun "Tucker" Ayame(Athrun Tylor[Birth Name])
    Race: Beast
    Gender: Male
    Age: 17
    Bloodtype: AB
    Aridia
    Name: Aridia Ayame
    Race: Newman
    Gender: Female
    Age: 21
    Bloodtype: O
    Cagali
    Name: Cagali Ayame
    Race: CAST
    Gender: Female
    Age: 2
    PM Trio
    Names: Mitsumi, Starra, Era
    Race: CAST - PM
    Gender: Female
    Age: 1

    Description: Athrun Ayame, called "Tucker" which he held on to from his childhood, it was formerly
    a racist term towards Beasts as Human's thought they were expendable and didn't require proper names though he is now an accomplished GUARDIAN along with his adopted sister Aridia Ayame and his 4 CAST
    siblings, Cagali who is the eldest of the children is a GUARDIAN themself and a tough fighter to boot, the three younger children Mitsumi, Starra and Era are P.M's, Aridia works in the GUARDIANs medical unit.

    Athrun is an assassin high up on the GUARDIAN ranks and a former member of the GUARDIANs special forces Flowen Squad, despite being a beast his IQ is most certainly above average although he is a bit hot-headed, he joined the ranks of 2Black_o_Steel2 to further himself in strength, intellect and teamwork skills, while his family remain standard GUARDIANs, he is constantly trying to keep them away from harm in all ways possible.

    Story
    |Chapter 1 - Alone|
    [Athrun Age 2-5-12][Aridia Age 9-16]

    Athrun is rumored to be the son of the rogue Alfort Tylor, he was found at the age of 5 in Mizuraki CD, having been forced to live there since the age of 2 after being abandoned, joining a young Aridia and her
    family and living on Neudaiz for 7 years, as he grew he observed the communion monks in their physical training exercises and practiced fighting on Ollakas and other native beasts, Athrun was much loved by Mikuru Ayame but Aridia's father, Itsuki treated him like a common dog...naming him Tucker -this lead to tension in the family and Athrun fled into the woods on multiple occassions, one fateful night at sunset Athrun had ran out to spy on the CoG monks training and Aridia followed to keep him out of trouble, Athrun tried fleeing from Aridia but he ended up tripping and falling off a ledge, only to land on the back of a Tengohg; Aridia preying for Athrun's safety noticed flames off in the distance, and as the Tengohg passed over it was shot down by an AMF Rifleman by the name of Fulyen Curtz who was purifying the area due to an environmental experiment gone wrong, plaguing the nearby flora and fauna, later on Aridia met up with Athrun whom was somewhat injured, it was that moment where she learnt she had healing abilities...Aridia and Athrun then returned home only to find their parents killed with barely a trace, the only evidence was Itsuki's missing photon research, the CoG removed all evidence of the attacks and erased the records of their existence, they pursued Athrun and Aridia into the Mizuraki CD with intent to kill.

    |Chapter 2 - A Feint Light|
    [Athrun Age 12][Aridia Age 16]

    Athrun and Aridia run through Habirao FD with no sign of hope, they hear the sounds of battle and see the glimmer of photon weapons through the trees, they try to go across a hill to avoid contact but end up running into one of the fighters, it turns out to be a GUARDIAN by the name of Obel Dallgun, CoG Archers soon catch up, Obel tells them to stop their actions, the photon master at the time - Dohgi Mikuna refused to let GUARDIANs prevent him from his duties, this caused stress in the relationship between CoG and the GUARDIANs however the lives of Athrun and Aridia are spared and they are given refuge on the GUARDIANs colony and Aridia takes up the career of a medic for the GUARDIANs and in doing so they're given a free room in the residential block along with mission rewards for food and other resources to live apon, leaving them safe from the CoG and Dohgi Mikuna.

    |Chapter 3 - Pulling It Together|
    [Athrun Age 12-15][Aridia Age 16-19]

    To be continued
    PC/PS2 - Tucker 142 Beast FF/FM/AF/PT = DECEASED =(
    Xbox360
    Yasha - ~56-65 AF, Human(I'll be the one laughing come suppUP)
    Yamato - ~1-20 FM in the making, Cast

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    wow, until I actually read that myself I hadn't realized how bad it looked, it looks really rushed =S (Then again, it was kinda rushed so...)

    UPDATE: I think I might end it there, I had plots for quite a few chapters ahead but unless people wish for me to continue I'll leave it at that.
    PC/PS2 - Tucker 142 Beast FF/FM/AF/PT = DECEASED =(
    Xbox360
    Yasha - ~56-65 AF, Human(I'll be the one laughing come suppUP)
    Yamato - ~1-20 FM in the making, Cast

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