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    Default "Revenge" my old fan fic is back!

    Yay! I'm re-posting it now that I have my internet back. I'll still post one chapter or two up at a time, but I'll be able to add new chapters more often since they are saved on my computer. so here's the first part:

    Prologue

    “Now Shadow ” Hyper Sonic said.
    “Chaaaooss Cooonntrrool” Hyper Sonic and Hyper Shadow yelled. The ARK was transferred to another place above Earth.
    “Shadow ” Sonic yelled as he watches his friend fall into Earth’s atmosphere.
    “This is what you wanted right, Maria? This is the promise I made to you...” Shadow said as he fell.
    ~In the ARK~
    Sonic walked in.
    “Where’s Shadow?” Rouge asked. Without saying a word, Sonic slowly trotted over to Rouge and handed her Shadow’s bracelet, “Poor Shadow.”
    “I had looked up to my grandfather. I wanted to be just like him. Do you think he meant to kill us all?” Eggman questioned Tails.
    “I’m not sure Eggman.”
    “So Rouge, are you going to search for more of those jewels you love so much?” Knuckles asked.
    “No, I’ve got something better than jewels on my mind. You’ll see. Everything will turn out all right.”
    “If you say so,” Knuckles chuckled.
    Amy walked over to Sonic, “What’s the matter Sonic?”
    “Huh? Oh, it’s nothing...Come on, lets go home, Amy.” Sonic replied.
    “Okay”
    As Sonic left, he said goodbye to his fallen friend, “Sayanora, Shadow the Hedgehog.”
    *a guy walks by and I put my foot out, he trips and falls on a trampoline, bounces off a cliff, hits the bottom where there's a lot of sharp rocks and yells* O.o Okay, here's what I think happened...

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    I'm also going to post the first chapter, since the prolouge doesn't tell you much about the actual story...

    Chapter 1

    Shadow has been wandering for days, except for him, it has seemed like eternity, “I wonder how long it’s been since I was transported here.” When Shadow was falling, he still had a very small amount of the power within him. He had enough to do one last chaos control. So he was chaos controlled to a place that he has no clue about.
    Shadow yawned and sat down on a rock to take a break. “I hope I’m getting closer to a village. I wonder where Sonic is right now....” he thought to himself unaware how close to Sonic and the rest he really was.
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    “Amy, Tails and I are goin’ out. Be back later ” Sonic shouted before he opened the front door.
    Amy came rushing over to them, “Wait Where are you guys going?”
    “Just for a walk,” Tails replied.
    “Oh, okay then. Just be back soon for dinner.”
    “Uhhh...Okay,” Sonic and Tails said at the same time.
    Once Sonic and Tails were outside, Sonic whispered to Tails, “Hopefully we’ll get home before Amy burns the house down.”
    Tails nodded, “Yeah, hopefully.”
    After walking for a while down by the beach, Sonic and Tails(mainly Sonic) decided to walk around the woods.
    “Sonic, it’s starting to get dark, don’t you think we should be heading home now?” Tails asked.
    “Come on. Lets just walk a little further.”
    Tails sighed, “Okay, fine...”
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    “I need to keep moving. They cannot find me. I will not let them find me I’ll die first I need to calm down, or else something could happen. Okay, so, where am I now? Well, if I find a village I’ll ask someone there. I must be careful. I can’t trust anyone,” said a trouble hedgehog named Andrea. “What was that? I heard something. What is it? Oh, it was probably just my paranoid mind making stuff up. I’m so paranoid that I’m starting to hear things!” Andrea thought to herself.
    Andrea continued walking to try and find a village. She was breathing heavily and she staggered as she walked. After hours of walking, Andrea finally fell and blacked out.
    *a guy walks by and I put my foot out, he trips and falls on a trampoline, bounces off a cliff, hits the bottom where there's a lot of sharp rocks and yells* O.o Okay, here's what I think happened...

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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYY!!!!
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    What in hell has happened this whole time?

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    Thanks, I would post and talk more but I gotta go cause there's a storm coming here. I'll post more chapters soon!
    *a guy walks by and I put my foot out, he trips and falls on a trampoline, bounces off a cliff, hits the bottom where there's a lot of sharp rocks and yells* O.o Okay, here's what I think happened...

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    Take your time, ally. I'll be reading those chapters again.
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    Meh, so far no one but you has cared about this story, but I'm still going to post it. Just for you! Hey, who knows, maybe some other people will read it and like it too....Anyway here's the next chapter:

    Chapter 2

    Sonic and Tails were about to head home when they heard someone talking.
    “I wonder who that could be,” Sonic whispered to Tails.
    “I don’t know, Sonic. Lets find out.”
    Sonic and Tails peeked through some bushes. They stood speechless. Standing there only a few feet away from them was Shadow, who was known to be dead.
    “What’s that?” Shadow thought to himself as he saw the bushes move. He stood from where he was sitting, “Who’s there?” Sonic and Tails emerged from the bushes. Shadow’s jaw dropped, “S..Sonic? T..Tails? Is that really you?”
    “Yes, it’s us. But...but I thought that you were dead.” Sonic answered.
    “No, I didn’t die. I used the last bit of power I still had to use Chaos Control, and I ended up in these woods. I’ve been here for days wandering around. I never knew I was even close to you guys.”
    “Well, it’s good that you’re alive,” Tails smiled.
    “Yeah, it is. Come on, we should get back so we can eat. Shadow, you come with us. We’ll get you cleaned up and give you something to eat. I hope Amy hasn’t already blown up the house.” Sonic said already walking toward his house.
    “Thanks, guys.” Shadow replied with a huge grin.
    The three of them walked for about ten minutes when Shadow said he saw something. “It looks like a hedgehog of some kind.” Shadow lead Sonic and Tails to where he saw the figure. They studied it. It seemed to be a female hedgehog. She had silky green fur with long hair (quills). She had many cuts and bruises, and looked like she hadn’t eaten for a long while.
    “I think we should help her out. Don’t you guys think so?” Shadow asked.
    “Yeah, sure. I think we could lend her a helping hand.” Sonic replied as he and Shadow picked the hedgehog up. “Tails fly up and see how much longer it should take ‘til we get home.”
    “Okay, Sonic.” Tails flew up and scanned the area. When he came back down he reported, “It should take only about another ten minutes.”
    “That’s good,” Shadow said.

    They reached the house and hurried inside. It had started to rain.
    “It’s about time that you guys got.....Oh my god...Shadow?” Amy stood shocked as they came in.
    “Yes, it’s me...” Shadow mumbled as he and Sonic carried the female hedgehog and placed her gently on the sofa.
    “Who’s that?” Amy asked Sonic as her eyes shifted over to the motionless figure.
    “We found her when we were heading here. She seemed like she needed help so we brought her with us.”
    “Oh, okay then. I’ll get some ice, she looks like she’s very swollen,” Amy said.
    “Good idea,” Shadow said. He felt the hedgehogs forehead, “Get some for her head too, she feels warm.”
    “Okay, I will.”
    Andrea moaned and everyone’s attention was on her. Andrea tried to get up, but she couldn’t move. “Where....Where am I?”
    “Well hello there. You are at my house. My friends and I found you laying unconscious in the woods,” Sonic replied with a friendly smile.
    “We thought that you looked like you were in need of some help,” Shadow said.
    “Well.... ummm....thank you.”
    Amy came back with a few towels with ice wrapped in them. She placed them on the swollen areas of Andrea’s body. Then put the last one on her forehead, “Here, this should help you feel better.”
    “AHHH It’s cold ”
    “It’s supposed to be cold,” Amy chuckled. “If it’s not cold then it wouldn’t be of much help.”
    “By the way, I think we should introduce ourselves. I’m Sonic and this is my house.”
    “I’m Amy, I live here with Sonic.”
    “Hello, I’m Tails. I also live here with Sonic.”
    Shadow just mumbled, “Hi, I’m Shadow...”
    “Hello, and thank you for helping me. My name is...Andrea.” Andrea said quietly as she started to doze off.
    “Good, she’s asleep. She needs it. Lets go and fix something to eat, now,” Amy whispered as she tip-toed into the kitchen.
    *a guy walks by and I put my foot out, he trips and falls on a trampoline, bounces off a cliff, hits the bottom where there's a lot of sharp rocks and yells* O.o Okay, here's what I think happened...

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    I remember how this came about, I know what is to come next, but I ain't saying just in case someone else is reading this in secret.
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    Do you remember what the last chapter number was when I stopped putting them up?
    *a guy walks by and I put my foot out, he trips and falls on a trampoline, bounces off a cliff, hits the bottom where there's a lot of sharp rocks and yells* O.o Okay, here's what I think happened...

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    uh......lemme see here..........*starts to think*I guess it was at the point where Andrea............wait, lemme pm you bout it.
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    Okay. Oh and I'll post a chapter either later or tomorrow. I want to spread the time out just in case someone else is reading it but not posting so that I don't go too fast.
    *a guy walks by and I put my foot out, he trips and falls on a trampoline, bounces off a cliff, hits the bottom where there's a lot of sharp rocks and yells* O.o Okay, here's what I think happened...

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