video game logic. you want something to happen that's logical ut then it's something illogical, then you are like "why didn't you do that!? it would make more sense!"Originally Posted by DaGamer14
video game logic. you want something to happen that's logical ut then it's something illogical, then you are like "why didn't you do that!? it would make more sense!"
Yes
I loved this part also. It's very touching and believable. I wish it would have been explored more since it's kind of short(part of the reason is I love Sonic x Amy or "Sonamy" as people call it).^^
Sonic is an animal, too along with Amy, Cream, and etc.
This one doesn't make any sense to me. If they are born intelligent, there's no purpose for Cream to go to school. The reason of Vanilla not letting her daughter go also seems weird, too. It would be more of her being so protective of Cream that she not let her go to school due to bullying or being influenced by the wrong crowd.
LOL! This part is funny. ^^
I like the idea of a kitchen stage. I also think it's funny since Sonic will be afraid of the frying pan and the oven, lol.
Although this scene is funny, Amy wouldn't abandon him like that even if she has "calmed down". It would be her opportunity to watch out for him and gaining gratitude from Sonic along with making her feel she's really needed.
LOL! This part made me laugh a lot. The only flaw is Eggman would be aware of his captives being able to fly.
LOL! I couldn't help but laugh at this. I know Shadow isn't very nice, but isn't he a little more caring towards Amy since she reminds him of Maria?
I'm not sure the reason why Amy and Shadow would be fighting. But, I overall like the concept of your script and hope to see you continue to do more in the future. ^_^
You cannot escape the inevitable, Sonic. You shall be glomped forever because you are lovable. XD
Amy- I think I got dirt on my skirt…
*shadow is kneeling down, panting*
Shadow- I!? shadow the hedgehog was beaten by a kid!?
Sonic- alright! She won! Now open the door for us!
*shadow grins and smiles*
Shadow- no can do…
Cream- no fair! Amy beat you!
Shadow- hahaha… foolish child… I DON’T GIVE UP THAT EASILY!!!
*the chaos emeralds appear and surround shadow*
Sonic- you lost… THERE’S NO NEED FOR THAT!
Shadow- really!? I always lose to you! I will NOT be beaten by a little girl!
*cream throws a rock at shadow’s head, causing the transformation to stop*
Shadow- OW!!!
Cream- open the gate! Mr. shadow!
Shadow- *grumble* FINE! Just tell me your business here…
Sonic- we’re trying to locate eggman’s base so I can get back to normal now, OPEN THE GATE.
*shadow opens the gate*
Shadow- there. I opened it.
*they walk through the gate*
Sonic- I swear, he tries to hard…
*they walk inside the base*
Amy- so, where do you think we should go?
Cream- I think we should find the master computer, from there we can access eggman's profile. the profile will most likely have the whereabouts of his base.
*amy and sonic look at her, confused*
Cream- what? I read books too, y'now...
Sonic- alright, where's the master computer?
Cream- top secret, only elite members and officials can get inside.
Sonic- you don't say... SHADOOOW!!!!
Amy- what are you doing?
Sonic- shadow is an elite member therefore, he can help us.
Cream- he looked pretty mad when amy beat him...
Amy- ya, maybe we should- sonic? sonic!?
*sonic runs up onto shadow's shoulder*
Sonic- hello shadow...
Shadow- W-WHAT!? GET OFF OF ME!
*shadow tries to shake him off, sonic holds on*
Sonic- na ah ah... not yet! what do you know about the master computer...?
Shadow- top secret.
Sonic- oh... shadow... see, I know how much you hate me and I know you want to fight me well, I can't fight like this, I'm only an inch tall! that's why we need the computer to find eggman then, you can fight me! and I won't be a pushover, you'll get to fight me at my best but, I can't do that unless you help me...
Shadow- heh... I accept! get ready to whipe that smirk off your face...
*shadow talks into his communicator*
Shadow- commander, a few of my-
*shadow looks at them*
Shadow- ...adquantinces want into the computer room so they can track down eggman.
Commander- I'll be out there in a minute.
Shadow- right!
*shadow looks to sonic*
Shadow- he'll be out in a minute.
Sonic- I'm small, not death.
*the commander walks out*
Commander- ah, amy, cream and...
*he walks up to shadow, he looks at sonic*
Commander- ...sonic?
Shadow sounds more like Dr.Eggman in this scene than himself.
ROTF!!! I can't stop laughing from this scene! I wish this happen in a Sonic game! Cream is a very smart little girl. XDD ^^
Sonic and Amy wouldn't be confused by what Cream just said. She wasn't usually overly long and complicated words like Tails would do.
It's odd Shadow gave in to Sonic than Amy or Cream in this situation.
You cannot escape the inevitable, Sonic. You shall be glomped forever because you are lovable. XD
I lol'd. I want to see Cream throw rocks at his head for real. I also like everyone's reactions to tiny Sonic
Hey Bess, quick question for ya, why do ya have to comment on the story and make the page that much longer? Just asking, no meaness or otherwise intended.
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