Hello! I figured I would try my hand at a PSU fanfic to help practice my writing and whatnot. That being said, I would appreciate any constructive criticism and suggestions! Thank you for reading this dusty subforum.
World with Me
In a faraway galaxy lies a sun orbited by three planets, the Gurhal System - a place inhabited by humans and their creations, CASTs, Newmen, and Beasts. For 500 years, there was a war among the races, a seemingly neverending conflict. Then, finally, an era of peace and prosperity lasted 100 years, but now a darkness has awoken, and threatens the universe.
This dark force was battled and defeated. Another era of peace and prosperity arrived, but then soon the universe was washed by a stagnant solitude. The gods and other natural governing forces of the universe had silently fled, all but one. This vessel of the Holy Light knew his destiny was to remain in this neglected place to ensure its continued existence, directing whatever iota of Holy Light to Gurhal. He nailed himself to his cross, becoming the Scape Doll of the peoples' craving for the divine.
"You listen to the gods, why have they forsaken us?" the people wail. He remains silent.
The laws of physics themselves have even abandoned the people.
The effects of evil repeat in the exact same thread - the SEED reappear even though salvation has been achieved hundreds of thousands times over.
The governing spines of these planets have proved useless and robotic lip service. All they do is make training simulations now, recreations of the past.
The planets revolve in eternal daylight, people mysteriously vanish without governments and conspiring gangs.
And those who do not vanish are overwhelmed with the exhaustion of repetition.
Life is meaningless, rumors of a parallel paradise are naught but a mirage people commit suicide to reach.
And the Grand Martyr Edward sits in his divine station to this day, praying for the people of this desolate universe.
Coincidentally enough, I was listening to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dj-bKOqojc4 when writing most of this. Thank you for your time!
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